Using the table above and the examples I wrote above, write down some ideas about the weather in your hometown. If there are differences, then write about all of those things. If the weather is the same all year round you have to talk about that.
When you have written some ideas down, practice speaking out loud.
I have asked students what can people do in their hometown and I often receive one answer — NOTHING!
There’s nothing to do in my hometown. It’s so boring.
That can’t be true. There must be things for people to do. Even if you don’t like to do these things, other people may enjoy doing these things and that means there are definitely some activities that people can do in your hometown.
Here is a list of ideas to inspire you.
Going to the gym
Playing tennis
Walking in the hills on the outskirts of town
Walking on the seafront of the town
Shopping malls and going shopping
Coffee shops and coffee culture
Eating out and going to restaurants
Going to bars and nightclubs (for older students!)
Dancing in the town square
Visiting the library
Helping charity organisations
Fishing in the local river
Swimming in the swimming pool
Many evening classes in the local community college
Now let me show you some examples
There is a swimming pool in my hometown and many people go there. Whenever I go there, it always seems very busy. I try to go early in the morning to avoid all the crowds.
The pool is really nice and clean. There is an area for the serious swimmers to swim in laps and then there is an area for people and children who just want to lounge around in the water and cool off a little bit.
There is also a diving area with three diving boards. The top board is very high, but I jumped off it once!
We are lucky because in my hometown we have so many restaurants. I think you could go out to dinner every night of the week and still not visit every restaurant in the city.
And the restaurants are all very different in style and cuisine. We have the local food but we also have Indian, Thai, French and Italian. It’s really nice for people to go out in the evening and eat a delicious meal with friends and family.
In my hometown, some older ladies like to go to the town square and do a special kind of dancing. They do it for exercise I think but also they can meet up and chat with each other. So it’s a social activity for them too.
Some people say that the music they play when they do their dancing is too loud. But I think we should just let them do it. They’re not really causing anyone any harm.
Look at the list of ideas I gave you above.
Use these and the examples and write down your own ideas for talking about things to do in your hometown. Practice together with a friend or show your teacher.
The architecture in your hometown means all the buildings. Are these buildings very old and traditional? Or new and modern? Is the architecture boring — if so, why do you think so?
You can use the following words to describe buildings and architecture in your hometown.
Poor | High-rise | Residential |
Wooden | Expensive | Old |
Traditional | Beautiful | Modern |
Luxurious | Spacious | Steel and glass |
Brick | Boring | Ugly |
Many cities these days have a downtown area with many high-rise buildings, all very modern and expensive. The suburbs of the city might consist of smaller houses and buildings or low-rise buildings — this is where the people usually live.
Let me show you some examples
Bath is a very old city, and the architecture is very old. Most of the buildings in the centre of the city are over 200 years old. I think there is a law to protect these buildings and houses. They look nice because they all have the same colour, made out of a special sandstone found in the local area.
But once you leave the city centre, the architecture changes. The houses are more modern in the suburbs. This is where people live.
The downtown area of my city is filled full of high-rise buildings. They are all very high and look very modern. It feels so busy walking around this area surrounded by such high buildings. Some of the buildings are so high that you can walk on one side of the street and be in the shade from the sun.
I live in a very quiet village in the countryside. All the houses are pretty old and there is no real special architecture. People just need a place to live and the local post office to buy some things. There is an old church though, and it looks very nice from the outside. I don’t know how old it is, but it looks very old.
Write down your own ideas about the buildings in your hometown. When you have enough sentences speak them out loud with a friend or classmate.
Your hometown doesn’t just consist of the actual town itself. When talking about your hometown you can also talk about the surrounding area of the town or city where you live.
This is especially true of a smaller town.
Your town may be surrounded by countryside.
What is in the countryside?
Are there farms and little villages?
Are they developing the land and building more houses or factories?
There must be something in this area, now is the time for you to talk about it.
There might be hills or mountains in the surrounding area of your hometown. Or maybe you live near the sea in which case you can talk about that.
Whatever exists just outside your hometown you can talk about it in the IELTS test. This is all part of the description of where you live and the examiner wants to hear about it.
I’ll give you some examples:
The surrounding area of my hometown is just countryside. Some small villages with just a few people living there. There is a new factory that makes tyres just outside my town. I think many people from my hometown work there now.
If you go south of my town, there is a big lake. I have gone past this lake and seen people fishing there.
All around my hometown are hills. It’s like my entire town is in a big hole in the ground! But it’s nice to see all the hills around the town. In the summer, they all look so green and in the winter, if it snows, all the hills are covered and everything looks white.
What is in the surrounding area of your hometown?
Take a few minutes and write down some ideas and thoughts. You must have seen what is just outside your hometown. Talk about this for a few minutes if you can.
If you live in a very small town, then chances are you may have only one bus an hour that takes you to the nearest big town. Or no bus at all.
In a bigger town, you could have several bus services taking people to different parts of the town. Or to other towns and the nearest big city.
You might have a train service. You might live in a big city and have a subway system.
The fact is that every town and city has a public transportation system — even if it is only one bus an hour.
These are the main kinds of public transportation:
Taxi (not really public but let’s put it in there)
Other lesser-known systems:
Shared bike (many cities use this these days)
The best way to talk about this is to look at the following questions and answer them:
What is this public transportation system?
Why do you use it?
Why do other people in your hometown use it?
Is it convenient?
Is it cheap/expensive to use?
How many lines does it have? (for bus and subway)
Is it crowded during rush hour?
And here is some vocabulary you might use when talking about public transportation:
Miss | Stop | Exit |
Line | Change | Commuters |
Fare | Catch | Delay |
Ticket | Pass (a special card) | Passengers |
Leave | Cancel | Run |
Unreliable | Rush hour | On-time |
When talking about the public transportation system in your hometown, in the IELTS test I advise you to talk about the most common or most popular public transportation system. If you try to talk about some public transport that is less known or used, you could run into trouble.
That means that you should only really talk about the bus, the subway or the train.
You can add at the end of your talk that there are other kinds of public transportation in your hometown.
Something like this:
…we also have many taxis, and a ferry that takes people over the river, but I have never used it. I only use the subway as it is the most convenient.
Shall we look at a couple of examples?
In my hometown, we have a new subway system. It is brand-new, so it is very clean and modern-looking. There are only three lines so far but there will be more lines in the future.
It is so much better than the bus. Much quicker and much more convenient. We don’t have any traffic jams now!
Some people complain and say that it is more expensive than the bus. It is a little more expensive but I think it is worth it for the convenience and the speed.
During rush hour it is a little difficult to get a seat but if you arrive early, you can find a seat no problem. I really love the subway in my hometown, it just makes going to school so much easier.
We have a bus system in my hometown. There are plenty of buses to take you wherever you want to go. But if you use the bus during rush hour, then you will definitely get stuck in traffic. There’s just no escaping it.
Sometimes I use a shared bike. These are easy to find and they are cheap to use. If it’s raining, I don’t use the shared bike but most other days I do.
You want to try?
Look at all the vocabulary and make sure you know the meanings of the words and then make sentences of your own.
Then think about the public transportation systems in your hometown and which one is the most common for people to use.
Write down some ideas in your notebook and make sentences.
Then with a friend speak them out loud.
Practice every day!
Do you have many shops in your hometown? Are there just a few local shops or do you have a giant shopping mall with all the latest fashion brands?
Every town has at least one shop to buy something.
These are the main kind of shops you might have in your town:
supermarket | greengrocer | baker |
butcher | fishmongers | florist |
wine store | drug store | convenience store |
book store | pet store | candy store |
As I have said before, let’s look at some questions and you answer them one by one.
What kind of shops and stores are there in your hometown?
What can people buy in these places?
Where are all the shops and stores?
Are they expensive?
What kind of people go there?
And then let’s look at some examples
I live in a big city and there are many shopping malls. There is one big shopping mall near my home and it is very popular with people, especially young people.
Younger people like to go there because it looks very fashionable and modern. All the shops are mainly selling fashionable clothes and there are two cool coffee shops on the first floor where you can sit and drink coffee.
The shopping mall huge. It is on five floors. On the top floor, there is a cinema and in the basement, there is a supermarket but it is a little expensive I think. I don’t go there. I only go to the clothes stores and shoe stores with my friends. We can’t always buy something we like but we like to look!
If I go to the mall with my friends, we like to drink coffee after we have looked all around the stores.
There are many small shops and stores in my neighbourhood. These shops are not very fashionable but they are very convenient and they sell many useful things that we might need in the house or in our daily life.
One shop we always use in the nearest convenience store. It is open until very late and opens very early in the morning. If we run out of things that we need then we can always go to the convenience store and buy what we need.
I see many of my neighbours there and my father always goes there in the morning to buy cigarettes.
The shop sells newspapers, snacks and sandwiches, soft drinks and ice cream. Every time I go there, they always have customers inside.
Now it’s your turn.
Look up the vocabulary and make sure you understand what all the words mean. Make your own sentences if you wish.
Then look at the questions above and the examples. This can help you to form your own answers. Write down all your ideas and put them into sentences in order.
Then practice speaking out loud.
You will not need to talk about all of the above topics about your hometown in the IELTS test.
If you were to talk about your hometown using all the topics included in this guide you would be talking for about 30 minutes!
The reason I included all the topics above is so you can answer any question the examiner fires at you in the IELTS test. If he asks you to talk about shopping or public transportation in your hometown, then you should be prepared. If he asks you about food or customs in your hometown, no problem for you.
Just go through all the steps and you can find out how to talk about your hometown no matter the question.
And as always — let me know in the comments below!
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It is so important to cover these areas used for IELTS tests because they are the ones that often catch students off guard. I especially liked the study charts as they ground students with vocabulary and observation points. The ideas also triggered memories of towns I’ve visited. Travel really helps as it gives you things to compare your town with. For example I visited a tiny town in Sweden and it was like a charming hobbit town with wondrous new customs and scenery quite unlike my own tiny hometown.
That is a great idea, Leona. I forgot to add that to the article… I used to ask students to compare their hometown to the big city we were living in and talk about the similarities and differences. It gives them a lot more to talk about, and in the IELTS test that really helps. How was Sweden? I’ve always wanted to visit.
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Hi Nani! I’m very glad you like this lesson plan. Feel free to use it in your class. If you want to download the lesson, you can get it here: https://gumroad.com/l/howtotalkaboutyourhometowninenglish Thank you Nani.
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I will explore the heart and soul of the town where I grew up. With My Hometown Essay, you can take a quick tour of the streets and landmarks of your hometown in about 150 words & 400 words, based on the following headings.
My hometown essay in english.
The name of my town is Noida. It is located near Delhi. Noida is a high-tech city in the Delhi-NCR region. Noida is the main city of Gautam Buddha Nagar. It is just a few kilometers from Delhi.
The climate in my hometown is too hot in summer and too cold in winter for only a few days. There is sufficient water in the rainy season, so there is no shortage of water in any season.
People from all walks of life live here. Among them are IT professionals, software engineers, businessmen, farmers, shopkeepers, and laborers.
The town is the center of trade. It is famous as an industrial town. There are many big MNCs (Multi-National Companies), large-scale factories, and several smaller factories.
There are various schools and some of them are of international standards. My school is DPS Noida, located near sector, 30.
In my town, there are several engineering colleges and degree programs. They are known for their discipline, results, and other achievements.
All modern facilities are available here. Transport is equally convenient here, and the metro makes traveling safe and easy.
The city’s public transportation runs on CNG, as well as private buses, autos, and battery rickshaws. In Noida, there are municipal parks in almost every locality.
The Noida Stadium sector-21 is a popular venue for events, functions, and exhibitions of all sizes.
Greenery is what attracts people to the park, and morning and evening are excellent times for exercise and jogging. It is a must for everyone to keep healthy and fit.
There are playgrounds, matches, and games played there. The market is electrified. Atta Market and GIP Mall are the most popular shopping malls in Noida.
There are some reliable stores to shop at, and they are home to many big & trustworthy publishers, too.
I love my town very much. There is greenery and the environment is pleasant. Modern facilities are well-developed and well-equipped. My wishes for its progress and prosperity are always the same.
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The town I lived in once was famous for one thing: it was home to the first three Prime Ministers of India.
Jawahar Lal Nehru was born in Prayagraj, Sri Lal Bahadur Shastri had a house here, and Indira Gandhi grew up here as well. Anand Bhawan, donated to the nation by the third Prime Minister, is now a place of historical importance.
Prayagraj is situated near the Sangam, the place where the two rivers, The Ganga and the Yamuna, meet. Thousands of tourists and pilgrims come to Prayagraj to dip in the Sangam.
It is a serene city because there are not many industries around. However, Naini, a suburb of Prayagraj, is a rapidly developing industrial hub.
There are a number of agricultural institutes, the Indian Telephone Industry, Universal Tyres factories, and a glass factory.
The city of Prayagraj has the Jeep Flash Light factories which make batteries. There are a few spots in Allahabad which have scenic beauty.
Visitor attractions include the old but majestic stone buildings of the High Court and the offices of the various departments.
Prayagraj is famous as a Hindu pilgrimage center. Tourists around the world come here to learn about this auspicious place. The main office of the Board of Secondary and Intermediate Education is situated in Allahabad.
The headquarters of the education department of Uttar Pradesh is located in Allahabad. The University of Allahabad is among the oldest and most prestigious universities that have produced many scholars.
The markets of Allahabad are not as extensive as those in metros like Delhi, Kolkatta, Noida, Bangalore, Hyderabad etc. Yet the Civil Lines market offers some attractions for outsiders.
Visitors want to see the street stalls, the picture houses, the fountain in the center of Civil Lines, and, above all, the Hanuman Temple.
Allahabad (now renamed Prayagraj after Yogi Adityananth took the oath as CM) City in Uttar Pradesh is associated with many historical stories. It is evident by the name Prayagraj, which means “the abode of God”.
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Students are often asked to write an essay on Home Town in their schools and colleges. And if you’re also looking for the same, we have created 100-word, 250-word, and 500-word essays on the topic.
Let’s take a look…
What is a home town.
A home town is the place where you are born and grow up. It is the place where you spend your childhood. It can be a small village or a big city. For many people, their home town holds a special place in their hearts.
Your home town is filled with memories. You remember the streets, the parks, the school, and the people you grew up with. These memories make your home town special. Even if you move away, you always remember your home town.
Your home town is important because it shapes your identity. It is where you learn your values and traditions. It is also where you make your first friends and have your first experiences. Your home town has a big impact on who you become.
Your home town plays a big role in your life. It is where you start your journey. It is where you learn, grow, and dream. Your home town is your starting point, and it always remains a part of you, no matter where you go.
Your home town is filled with memories. You remember the streets where you played with your friends. The school where you studied and learned new things. The park where you had fun and enjoyed the beauty of nature. These memories make your home town a unique and special place.
The people in your home town are also important. They are like a big family. You know them and they know you. They help you when you need it and share your joy and sorrow. They make your home town feel like home.
Your home town is important because it’s a part of who you are. It’s where you learned about life. It’s where you made your first friends. It’s where you learned your values and beliefs. Your home town has shaped you into the person you are today.
In conclusion, a home town is more than just a place. It’s a collection of memories, people, and experiences that have shaped you. It’s a part of your identity. No matter where you go in life, your home town will always hold a special place in your heart.
Introduction.
A home town is a place where we are born and grow up. It is a place that holds many memories and experiences of our life. It is a place where we have our family, friends, and neighbors. It has a special place in our hearts.
People and culture.
The people of Greenville are very warm and welcoming. They live a simple life and are always ready to lend a hand to others. The city has a rich cultural heritage. There are many festivals celebrated throughout the year. These festivals bring people together and strengthen the bond of the community.
There are many interesting places to visit in Greenville. The city park is a popular spot where people like to spend their free time. There is also a museum that displays the history and culture of the city. The city library is a treasure trove of books and a favorite place for many students. The river bank is another beautiful place where people go for a walk or enjoy a picnic.
In conclusion, a home town is a special place for everyone. It is where we learn and grow. It is where we make friends and create memories. My home town, Greenville, is a place that I will always cherish. It has shaped me into the person I am today and will always be a part of me.
That’s it! I hope the essay helped you.
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If you’re not sure what exactly a descriptive essay is and how to write one, you’ve come to the right place. I’m Tutor Phil, and in this tutorial I’ll explain how a descriptive essay works and how to write it, step by step.
We’ll write one together, so you’ll have a great example of a descriptive essay.
A descriptive essay is a piece of writing in which the author describes a place, a person, an object, an animal, or a process. The purpose of a descriptive essay is to move the reader to some kind of a revelation, conclusion, or decision about the subject.
It is very important to note that a descriptive essay is not an argumentative essay. You’re not presenting an argument and doing whatever it takes to support it.
In a descriptive essay, your intention should be to describe the subject in such a way that the reader would create her own impression of it.
At the same time, your essay is not neutral because it is colored by your own perception or experience of the subject.
In other words, you are implying and suggesting, not blatantly pushing an opinion.
You want to let the reader see, hear, touch, smell, and taste the place you’re describing. And that experience should lead the reader to an appropriate impression or conclusion.
Step 1. choose the subject.
Maybe your instructor has already chosen the subject for you. If not, choose a country, city, or a place within a city or a geographical location that you are familiar with.
Ideally, it is a place that you have been to and have a good memory of it. A descriptive essay about a place should not rely solely on research, in most cases.
The real value of your essay is that you know that place, and perhaps it has a special meaning for you or evokes feelings that no other place can evoke.
So, unless you have to write about a specific place where you have never been, choose a location that has a special place in your heart.
Sometimes, your subject can be a place with which you may have negative associations. But most likely, it is a beloved place that has left an indelible impression on your heart and mind.
Criteria for choosing the place
I’ll give you an example. For me, one particular little spa town in Europe won me over when I first visited it many years ago. Its name is Carlsbad, or Karlovy Vary. The terms are interchangeable. One is of German origin, and the other is native Czech.
It is located in the western part of Czech Republic, not too far from the German border. It is serene, spectacular, and magical, and I’ll choose it as the subject for our sample descriptive essay.
By the way, Carlsbad, California was named after Karlovy Vary because of the similar mineral content of the underground waters found in the American cousin city.
I understand that you’re probably writing this essay to fulfill a requirement for your class. In which case, your audience is your teacher or professor.
But even if you’re writing for your instructor, you should still have a particular audience in mind because this will help you form ideas and keep your thoughts flowing.
Knowing your audience will inform your choices of what to include and what to exclude in your descriptive essay because your reader may care about some aspects of this place but not others.
Criteria for choosing an audience
Let’s come back to our example of Karlovy Vary. As I already mentioned, it is a spa town, which means that its attractiveness lies in its therapeutic qualities.
I first visited this gem of a town back in 2004 as a result of a real academic and professional burnout. I believe I was still an undergraduate student finishing up my studies, and I also had a stressful job.
I lived in Brooklyn, which is a borough of New York City, and this metropolis is known for its stressful lifestyle.
New York has all the disadvantages of living in a large city, such as pollution and other stressors that can really suck the life energy out of its dwellers if they are not careful.
I lived in New York for 25 years, and I love this city. I don’t want to come across as totally negative about it.
But focusing on the negatives about my city in this case will help you see how I am choosing the audience for this essay we’ll be writing together in this tutorial.
You see, New York City is a direct opposite of Karlovy Vary in several critical ways.
Establishing a contrast helps define an audience
New York is noisy. Drivers here are notorious for incessant horn honking. And you can hear an ambulance or a police siren probably every 15 minutes or so.
Conversely, Karlovy Vary is super quiet. Such a crazy hustle and bustle doesn’t exist here, and drivers don’t have a reason to honk the horn all the time. It is also very rare to hear a police or an ambulance siren.
Air quality in New York is decent for a big city, but it is still relatively polluted . All the millions of cars and trucks produce way too much carbon dioxide. You can actually see the smog from some vantage points.
The air in Karlovy Vary is virtually pristine. The town is surrounded by hills, and car traffic is not allowed in the city center.
The landscape in New York is a bit monotonous and often fails to inspire. They don’t call this city “a concrete jungle” for nothing. The overall atmosphere is hardly conducive to a great mood or daily inspiration.
Conversely, Karlovy Vary offers aesthetically pleasing, relaxing, and inspiring architecture and landscape. It’s like entering a spa, only the spa is a whole town.
Now that we have this contrast, it is easy to see who might be interested in learning more about Karlovy Vary. Our ideal audience is someone who:
So, our essay becomes a sort of a virtual or a fantasy escape until an actual trip becomes possible.
Your audience might have different challenges, needs, and desires. It could be someone who:
Think of these factors when determining your audience. In the meantime, because we’ve already identified our ideal reader – a stressed out urban dweller – we can move on to the next step.
No matter what kind of an essay you’re writing, you want to divide the main topic into subtopics. In other words, you want to create some kind of a structure that will consist of parts.
I use and teach my students to use the technique I call the Power of Three.
What this means is that instead of having just one big topic, such as one town, we can have three aspects of this town to discuss.
Incidentally, we already talked about three major differences between NYC and Karlovy Vary. These are noise levels, air quality, and landscape. So, perhaps we can use one or more of these aspects of a city as sections of our essay.
We must keep in mind that we’re not writing a comparative essay , although that’s a possibility, too.
We’re writing a descriptive essay. So, we need to find three aspects of the town that we can discuss one after another to put together a rich and detailed enough picture of this place.
Note that these three aspects correspond to the senses of hearing, smell, and sight.
Let’s make a preliminary list of such aspects of Karlovy Vary:
If we go about writing about these three aspects of Karlovy Vary creatively, we will have three nice sections or paragraphs that will form the body of our essay.
Note that we’ll probably use more than one sensory perception, such as sight or smell, in each section. We’ll simply use one of three senses as a primary focus in each of our three sections.
It would make sense to begin the discussion of the city by describing it visually. So, this will be our primary focus in the first section.
Then, we can proceed to the sense of hearing. Why? Because our last section will be about air and water. And we should probably leave those for last because we can hear the water before we can taste it. That’s just the way it works in Karlovy Vary.
So, the primary sense perception in our second section will be hearing. And this section won’t be just about how quiet it is.
In fact, the real contrast between a big city and Karlovy Vary is the quality of the soundscape, not just the simple quietness, although it’s a part of it. So, we’ll focus on all the little sounds that make this place unique.
Finally, in the third section or paragraph, we’ll talk about the air and the water, which will correspond to the senses of smell and taste, primarily.
Again, we’ll be using any sense perceptions we feel necessary to make the reader’s experience as real as possible.
And now we have our place, we know our audience, and we have our three main ideas about this place that we’ll use to structure the essay.
We can begin writing, and we’ll start with the opening paragraph.
An introductory paragraph in a descriptive essay offers you a lot of flexibility in how you choose to write it.
You can start off with a particular example of a sense perception, drop your reader in the middle of a town square, or begin with an abstract concept.
I would like to suggest an easy and practical way to do it. In the first sentence or two, pull your reader from the outside world into this particular magical place you’ve chosen to write about.
Then, focus on the place you want to describe and say something general about it that would set the context or provide a perspective.
And finally, set some kind of an expectation for what’s to follow. You can create a sense of mystery, if you like. Remember, this is not an argumentative essay. So, you have more room for creativity.
This is where we begin to put together our descriptive essay example. Let’s write our introductory paragraph.
Descriptive Essay Introduction
“When the city has worn you down, the body is tired, and the soul yearns for a respite, you can count on a little magic gem of a town that will nourish you back to life. The name of the place is Karlovy Vary, and it is nested in the heart of Europe, in Western Bohemia, a region in Czech Republic famous for its spa towns. Its beautiful architecture, therapeutic landscape, clean air, and mineral waters offer the weary a healing adventure and a feast for the senses.”
What have we done in this paragraph?
We’ve pulled the reader into the world of this small spa town. We first descended in their world of the stressful city, and then we turned their attention to its opposite. We named the town and explained where it is located.
And finally, we provided a glimpse of what to expect in this descriptive essay about this town. Now, we’re ready to write the body of the essay.
We know our three main sections, which in this case correspond to three sense perceptions. Each section can have more than one paragraph. It all depends on how long your essay has to be.
If you are writing an essay of about 500-600 words, then a five-paragraph structure will do the job. If you need to write 2000 words or more, then you’ll have three sections instead of just three paragraphs.
And then each section can also be divided into two or three subsections (using the Power of Three, if you like). And each subsection can be a paragraph or more.
Just remember – the more words you need, the more dividing into subtopics you must do. The key to writing more is dividing one idea into several supporting ideas. And then you simply treat each supporting idea as a tiny essay.
If you struggle with essay writing in general or need to brush it up, I recommend you read my tutorial on essay writing for beginners . This would be a great place to turn to next.
Now, let’s write out our body paragraphs. Since there’s quite a bit to cover, we’ll probably take two paragraphs per section to get the job done.
Descriptive essay body paragraphs
“When you stay in one of the pretty little hotels in Karlovy Vary, you are likely to be descending the hills towards the hot springs every morning. No matter which part of town you live in, you’ll be greeted with a magnificent sight of little hotels and spas whose architecture has a unifying 19th century style. At the same time, each building has its own character, color, and features. The town is situated on several hills, and the hotels are lined up along about four levels.
The first level is down by the river Tepla, and these hotels are only a few because most of the downtown is occupied with hot springs colonnades where people gather and drink hot mineral water. The next three levels ascend from the springs, and you can either take the stairs or even use a funicular that will take you to the highest level to the Hotel Imperial. As you exit your hotel in the morning, you are greeted with a sight of a collection of small, three to four story buildings that look like birthday cakes. They are pink, green, blue, red, turquoise, and any color you can imagine. You suddenly realize how this variety of colors and shapes strewn over the hillsides all facing you and the city center makes your head spin and makes you feel like you’ve never felt before. Your healing has begun with landscape therapy.
As you descend the stairs to reach the hot springs, you notice the abundance of oxygen in the air because it has a subtle but distinct smell, a bit like the way air smells right before a rain. Then, as you pass by another hotel, and you’ll pass more than one, a light whiff of toast and fried eggs with bacon hits you, stirring your appetite. It is customary to drink a cup of hot mineral water before you come back to your hotel for breakfast. It is called a drinking cure.
As you keep walking towards the geyser and the springs that surround it, you notice another astonishing detail. Nobody is in a rush. Nobody has anywhere to be except right here, right now. Travelers with cute little porcelain cups stroll along without a worry in the world, taking in the sights, the smells, and the sounds of the birds chirping and singing all around. Their serenity infects you. You slow down, too. You begin to look, smell, and listen. This town has got you.
Karlovy Vary is famous for its healing mineral waters that are known to alleviate gastrointestinal issues. These waters really do have magic powers. You have your little sipping cup with you, and when you reach one of the springs, you wait for your turn to fill it up, walk off, and begin sipping. The water has a very subtle smell, but its taste is pretty strong for water. It has very high mineral content and tastes salty. Most people like the taste. Some find it too strong. But one thing is for sure – by the time you’re about half way through with your cup’s content, your digestive juices have begun to stir.
The hot springs flow out through several fountains, each with its own intricately detailed colonnade. The mineral content of water bursting out of each fountain is identical. But the temperature of the water varies from really hot to mild and comfortable. Your “spa doctor” actually prescribes which fountains to use and how much to drink. Sipping the water out of a special porcelain cup with a built-in straw-like system is a special pleasure of its own. The point is not to rush but to take about 20 minutes to empty the cup. In the meantime, you have a chance to take in the magnificent serenity that surrounds and infuses you. When you’ve drunk your water, it is time to head back to your hotel and eat breakfast. You repeat this routine three times a day for the duration of your stay. By day three, you are serenity itself. By day fourteen, you are a brand new person.”
A conclusion in a descriptive essay is, like the introduction, more flexible than a conclusion in an argumentative essay.
You can conclude your essay in any way you really want as long as you observe one rule. Just make sure you zoom out and write in more general terms.
It is not the time to add specific details and examples. This is the time to wrap things up and end on a general note.
Your conclusion can be very short – only a couple of sentences. But you can take your space and write as much or as little as you feel like. You can always go back and trim it down or beef it up.
Let’s write our conclusion.
Our Conclusion
“Upon reading this, you may feel that this town is described as some sort of a paradise. And in a way, it is, especially if you are traveling from a big city and carrying a load of accumulated stress. But it’s not until you see, touch, smell, hear, and taste it for yourself that this European jewel will become a part of your entire being forever.”
It’s okay to be a little emotional and perhaps to even exaggerate a little in the concluding paragraph. Just notice that this one is more general than any of the body paragraphs.
It also touches upon or mentions every sense perception evoked in the body of the essay.
I hope this was helpful. Now go ahead and write that descriptive essay about a place!
Tutor Phil is an e-learning professional who helps adult learners finish their degrees by teaching them academic writing skills.
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