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How to Write a Biomedical Science Personal Statement

Tips for starting your biomedical science personal statement.

Writing your personal statement can feel like a mammoth task and knowing where to start can be really tricky. It is important, however, to not get too wrapped up in what a perfect biomedical sciences personal statement should be and instead think about what will make you and your passion for the subject stand out .

Everyone’s personal statement will be different as there is no one way to write it, but there are some essential components that your biomed personal statement should include. Committing to a three or four year degree course at a top university is no walk in the park; you need to be invested in pursuing what you are applying to for at least the next 3/4 years, therefore showing your passion for biomedical sciences is one of the most important components of your personal statement.

But what does this mean and how do you portray this on one side of A4? Mention specific topics/ themes that you like about biomedical sciences , showcase some subject knowledge, highlight super-curriculars that you have engaged with as well as writing about any extracurriculars, personal interests and skills that you have that will make you a fantastic candidate to study biomedical sciences at a top uni.

Showing My Passion for Biomedical Science?: The Importance of Super-Curriculars

Most top unis, including Oxbridge, will be less interested in your extracurricular activities and more interested in how you can prove your passion for biomedical sciences. Super-curriculars are the best pieces of evidence you can provide – they show that you have gone above and beyond your school syllabus and taken initiative to broaden your knowledge.

These may include things like reading books related to the subject, listening to podcasts, reading magazine and newspaper articles, completing MOOCs (massive online open courses), watching documentaries, attending taster days or any relevant work experience you have undertaken . By no means do you need to do all of these but having a couple of examples will be an excellent way to make your biomedical science statement standout.

Having said this, it is most important to engage with what you’re genuinely interested in rather than what you feel you should be reading, watching, listening to and so on – this way your pure interest will shine through naturally without it feeling forced. If invited to interview as well, this will make it much easier for you to talk about your personal statement as it will all be things you enjoyed.

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Book recommendations for Biomedical Sciences

The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks by Rebecca Skloot – this book tells the story of a woman who died in 1951 from cervical cancer whose legacy continues to this day with the HeLa cell line. Taken from Henrietta’s tumour while she was still alive, it was cultured in a lab and found to be immortal. Having been used in an array of biomedical research since then, the ethical issues and dilemmas raised in this book provide insight into some of the arguments and discussions that are dominant within the field of bioethics.

The Man Who Mistook His Wife for a Hat by Oliver Sacks – this book by the neurologist Oliver Sacks provides a series of case studies of some of the most notable patients of Sacks’ career; despite this book being particularly fascinating to those interested in neuroscience and psychology, this is an interesting read for anyone entering the field of biomedical science.

The Epigenetic Revolution by Nessa Carey – epigenetics is the study of differences between genetically identical organisms which have non-identical phenotypes; this book provides a detailed and fascinating insight into the relatively new discipline of epigenetics.

Bad Science by Ben Goldacre – an engaging analysis of the current state of science; particularly recommended if you are interested in research and how science can often be “lost” behind money, media and business.

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Are my extra-curriculars important for Biomedical Sciences?

When it comes to extra-curriculars, it can be tempting to write a list of everything you’ve done to show how well-rounded you are, however, it is better to only mention a couple and relate it back to why you should be offered a place to study biomedical sciences. For example, being a prefect equips you with leadership and teamwork skills which would be useful during group project and practical classes; completing a Duke of Edinburgh award would provide you with problem solving skills, again important during practical classes and also when critically appraising primary papers.

Addressing the universities’ selection criteria

To make your whole personal statement shine even brighter you should address specific selection criteria from the course webpage on the universities’ websites. The University of Oxford’s Medical Sciences Division website says they are looking for biomed candidates who show “intellectual curiosity and enthusiasm” , as illustrated by your examples of seeking out super-curriculars for instance. Similarly, communication skills can be shown through jobs that you may have had – “I have worked in my local charity shop for 2 years, talking with customers and colleagues helped me to develop my interpersonal skills.”

How Do I Start Drafting and Structuring My Biomed Personal Statement?

You can never have too many drafts of your personal statement. It is best to start early so you have time to edit and adapt and improve. Often when you think you have a final copy you can go back and make even more improvements. Having a break and coming back with a fresh pair of eyes can help you spot gaps or errors or can even help you reduce the character count (as UCAS has a strict limit on characters so it is important to keep your paragraphs concise and to the point). Make sure to create links between each section/ paragraph to make the whole personal statement flow as one, instead of it reading like a list of what you’ve done and why you should be given a place to study biomedical sciences.

If you are struggling with the structure of the statement it is a good idea to simply write whichever paragraph you can and then come back at the end to order your paragraphs and create links. You may want to write your ending before you’ve written your introduction – there is no right or wrong way to do this, it just has to be yours.

How Do I End My Biomed Personal Statement?

Concluding your personal statement for biomedicine can feel just as hard as starting it but at this point you are almost there! If you can, it is good to conclude with a punchy sentence, something that nicely rounds up what you have been saying throughout: that you are a passionate biomedical scientist who is excited to pursue a biomedical sciences degree. You could refer back to what makes you the ideal biomed candidate and use keywords from the degree course webpages to help.

Here is an example:

In conclusion, my unwavering passion for biomedical science, coupled with my commitment to ongoing learning and contributing meaningfully to the field, drives my aspiration to embark on this transformative journey of academic growth, making me eager to bring my unique perspective, dedication, and skills to the vibrant and innovative community of biomedical researchers.

Applying to Oxford Biomed? Here's What You Should Also Do

Oxbridge and other top universities will use your personal statement as a component of their short-listing procedure. Oxford will use your personal statement to generate questions for the interview to which you may be invited. For biomed, these questions relating to your biomedical science personal statement are likely to be ice breakers as the interviewers will expect you to be comfortable talking about your personal statement and anything that you have mentioned within it. Therefore, it is important that you write your statement with the expectation that you will be asked to expand upon and explain every single sentence.

Biomedical Personal Statement Example

My fascination with the intricacies of life has propelled my journey towards understanding the complexities of the human body. The captivating narratives of Oliver Sacks' "The Man Who Mistook His Wife for a Hat" ignited my interest in neuroscience, prompting me to explore the underlying mechanisms of neurological disorders. This curiosity laid the foundation for my journey into the field of biomedical science. As I delved into the world of biomedical science, Nessa Carey's "The Epigenetic Revolution" provided a profound insight into the dynamic interplay between genetics and the environment. This exploration sparked my curiosity about epigenetic modifications and their implications for human health. It served as a thematic link, bridging my interest in neuroscience to the broader realm of genetics and molecular biology. Eager to complement my theoretical knowledge with practical insights, I actively sought diverse experiences. I love the New Scientist weekly podcast, which offers a dynamic platform for me to stay abreast of cutting-edge discoveries and emerging trends in biomedical research. An episode titled "Decoding the Brain: Unravelling the Mysteries of Neurodegenerative Diseases" particularly resonated with me, connecting seamlessly with my earlier fascination with neuroscience and serving as a catalyst for my interest in the molecular underpinnings of neurodegenerative disorders. This exposure not only expanded my knowledge but also honed my ability to critically evaluate scientific discourse, a skill integral to navigating the ever-evolving landscape of biomedical sciences. My research experience in Dr. Smith's lab, underscored the importance of interdisciplinary collaboration in unravelling the complexities of biomedical challenges. The laboratory work, focusing on cellular signalling pathways, provided a tangible link between theoretical concepts and practical applications discussed in the podcast episode. Recognising the importance of staying at the forefront of scientific advancements, I undertook a Massive Online Open Course (MOOC) on advanced techniques in molecular biology. This experience not only deepened my understanding of molecular techniques but also acquainted me with the global community of aspiring scientists and researchers. The collaborative spirit within the online cohort mirrored the interdisciplinary approach I envision for my future in biomedical sciences, reinforcing the theme of collaboration and its pivotal role in scientific progress. Exploring topics through podcasts like "The Biomedical Odyssey" has been instrumental in contextualising classroom learning within the broader scope of real-world applications. For instance, I found a podcast episode on "CRISPR: Gene Editing and the Future of Medicine" particularly fascinating. The prospect of precise gene editing raises questions that extend beyond the laboratory into the realm of bioethics. Exploring the ethical considerations associated with CRISPR prompted me to grapple with fundamental questions about the balance between scientific progress and moral responsibility. In addition to my academic pursuits, I have actively sought opportunities to engage with the broader scientific community. Attending conferences, such as the International Conference on Biomedical Sciences, allowed me to interact with eminent researchers and gain insights into the multifaceted nature of contemporary biomedical challenges. These experiences have not only broadened my perspective but have also reinforced my commitment to contributing meaningfully to the field, connecting my academic endeavors to the broader scientific community. In conclusion, my journey in biomedical science has been marked by a relentless pursuit of knowledge, a commitment to hands-on learning, and an unwavering curiosity about the frontiers of scientific discovery. Armed with a solid foundation, a critical mindset, and an eagerness to contribute to the ever-evolving field, I am poised to embark on the next chapter of my academic journey in biomedical sciences.

The best biomedical personal statements are original and personal to you, showcasing your passion for pursuing a degree in biomedical sciences and encompassing what you are genuinely interested in.

By Evie (Biomedical Science, University of Oxford)

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Studying the intricate workings of the human body through my A-level courses in Biology and Chemistry, I have been fascinated by the scientific causes behind disease. This has confirmed to me that Biomedical Sciences is suited to me as I will be enabled to further my knowledge and understandings of interactions within the human body.

Whilst studying Chemistry, I have been intrigued by the huge effect that changes on a molecular level can have on bodily function. For instance, the importance of the carbonic acid – hydrogen carbonate buffering action in blood in preventing potentially fatal acidosis. Moreover, the importance of screening for harmful optical isomers of chiral molecules in drug synthesis, illustrated by the devastating birth defects of one optical isomer of thalidomide. Importantly, I have undertaken a research task where I have planned and carried out the synthesis of aspirin. This has prepared me for laboratory work by developing my practical skills in risk assessment, accurate use of equipment and purification techniques.

In my Biology course, I have enjoyed learning about somatic cell gene therapy and how the insertion of a functional copy of the CFTR gene into a liposome relieves symptoms associated with Cystic Fibrosis. The prospect of working in a field that can develop new treatments similar to this that can improve quality of life for sufferers is exhilarating.

In my free time, I have completed extra research to expand my understanding of human biology. Reading ‘Do No Harm’ by McEwan has taught me about neurosurgery and has excited me to study the role of the nervous system in the processing of stimuli. Furthermore, I have participated in the HE+ Biology programme run by the University of Cambridge , where I was enthralled by extension lectures on conditions, such as gestational diabetes.

In July 2017, I travelled to Warsaw for 2 weeks through Gap Medics for hospital work experience. During this time, I conversed with a range of medical professionals and patients whose first language was Polish, enabling me to develop my communication skills. My first week was spent shadowing a nurse in an ophthalmology department. I saw first-hand the importance of laboratory work in healthcare diagnosis and treatment as I often took patient blood samples to the hospital laboratory where vital analysis took place. I spent my second week with a paediatrician, where my huge interest in the cause of disease was sparked by witnessing a patient with a rare case of Maple Syrup Urine Disease. I was intrigued to learn how this autosomal, recessive metabolic disorder is caused by a mutation in the genes for the production of a protein complex that breaks down the amino acids leucine, isoleucine and valine. This has fuelled my ambition to understand more about the complexity of the human body, where a single change in the base sequence of DNA can cause huge implications to normal functioning.

I have demonstrated commitment and improved my communication skills through executing group presentations on specific career paths for Southampton Junior University. Moreover, during my time completing the National Citizen’s Service, I worked as part of a team to plan a family fun day to fundraise for Autism Hampshire. This experience enabled me to show exceptional time management skills. Finally, working as a stadium cashier has enhanced my interpersonal skills and ability to make decisions under pressure.

A career in the field of biomedical science greatly excites me as I’ll be given the opportunity to further my scientific learning to understand the human body on a deeper level. This will set me up with the knowledge to pursue a career where I will have the potential to research into new treatments that could revolutionise medicine, and improve the quality of life of a sufferer with a disease currently thought to be incurable.

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Biomedical sciences personal statement example 33.

I have always been interested in Biology and Chemistry. I find them stimulating and challenging subjects, and over the years of studying them both, my interest in them has increased. This is why studying biomedical sciences at university is an ideal choice for me

This year, whilst studying for my AS level subjects, I attended a Biology Conference at Westminster Centre Hall to increase my understanding of today's biological world. There were a variety of speakers; I was particularly fascinated by Professor Lord Robert Winston's lecture on infertility and IVF, the concepts of it, and the morality behind reproductive manipulation, which also discussed how acceptable it is to interfere with human reproduction just because the technology to do so exists. Another lecture I found captivating was by Professor Gordon McVie, on cancer cells, which illustrated what happens to cells to cause them to develop into tumours. I enhanced my knowledge about these subjects from the magazine 'Biological Sciences', which includes articles from various professors and doctors. Over the past year this magazine has stimulated my interest in biology and medicine. By reading it I have increased my understanding of the influence of today's biotechnology and the ethical problems resulting from it, which has lead me to believe that bioethics plays a significant role in the developments in medicine. This understanding of the concepts has allowed me to question the right and wrong of some of the issues, and how the law fits in. Another feature I have found intriguing is the conservation of biodiversity, which does not just include biological factors but also cultural, social and economic ones

Over the summer 2004, I completed work experience within a GP's surgery, where I was able to sit in on doctor- patient sessions, where permissible. This amplified my perception of doctor-patient relationships and allowed me to view what demands are made upon a doctor

At school, I am a laboratory assistant in the Chemistry department, where I help set up experiments for coming lessons. Also during school hours, I attend a veteran's home; St David's, where I talk to the people there and build an understanding of their lives, something I find is rewarding on both parties. My mathematical studies have allowed me to think logically and also stimulate my mind. I have done the intermediate mathematical challenge and received a gold and silver; I will soon be taking the senior mathematical challenge. History has helped me develop vital analytical skills and helped me understand the importance of past mistakes. In Chemistry, I find the organic side of the course more thought provoking, especially making drugs such as aspirin and acquiring knowledge of its history

Biology is where my interest of studying Biomedical sciences stems from, as it explains a world not visible to the eye, yet plays a central role in everyday life

Out of school, I partake in life drawing classes; this motivates my interest in art and allows me to think in a broader manner. I find it is an exercise that expands my thoughts, leading to more diverse ideas, which I feel is important, in comparison to thinking within set boundaries. I have a weekend job at Waterstone's and this allows me to interact with people and help develop my communication skills. It has also helped me build up my team working skills, which helps me to be a more reliable and trustworthy person. I also tutor for 11+ plus exams, in which I help children with their mathematics, reading and verbal reasoning skills. This is a worthwhile and enjoyable experience. My school and out of school activities have allowed me to increase my ability to manage my time, which I believe has considerable importance for studying Biomedical Sciences.

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How is it that this person.

Wed, 13/02/2008 - 02:15

How is it that this person can fit in so many activities in their life? He/she is studying at college, working at the weekends, helping out at the veteran's home and also tutors children for their +11 exams!? And during that, they've had time to visit lectures and read biology magazines? I'm sorry, this personal may be VERY dedicated to their career and future prospects, and I respect that. But he/she is not a normal teenager! Good personal statement, by the way.

i cannot find an order to

Wed, 02/04/2008 - 18:16

i cannot find an order to this statement. the content is great!

wth is this person talking

Wed, 30/07/2008 - 13:08

wth is this person talking about?a good personal statement should not be like this and yet people still say it's good.

oh god, this is boring

Tue, 09/09/2008 - 09:49

this statement is ok, but i

Thu, 11/09/2008 - 18:14

this statement is ok, but i agree that there is no possible way that this person can fit all this in their life. i have enough trouble fitting in the normal things.

Hmm... Full of yourself?

Fri, 10/10/2008 - 11:04

Lol, this person seems very intent upon mentioning as many biological activities and magazines they have read, and i agree with the person who said "How is it that this person can fit in so many activities in their life?" There doesn't seem to be any passion in what they say, only intent upon trying to persuade the reader of how much they know, some of which I believe to be fabricated, because I am also dedicated to biology, but I never manage to fit all of this into my life, and I don't even have a part time job!

u wat, u fit all dat in, get

Mon, 03/11/2008 - 23:35

u wat, u fit all dat in, get a life lol, only messin good statement but i think its 2 much abat urself and wat u do chill out yh

Tue, 25/11/2008 - 15:55

Just looking at example personal statments for my little brother and have lost the one I did three years ago. However I just wanted to comment on this one as it is for the same subject that I am now studying at university. My personal statment was nothing like this, I wrote a brief paragraph explaining why I wanted to do biomedical science and that was all. The rest of the statment was more about what made me interesting as a person. I was a prefect, I marched on rememberance day at the Menin Gate in Ypres Belgium. I did not attend extra lectures or anything like that. I am now on placement at an immunology laboratory learning a lot more that I would ever have known when I was that age whilst some of my friends who work hard but don't have any hobbies (like kickboxing or knitting or anything interesting) are now struggling. Universities don't want to know what you already know, you are going there to learn after all. Well rounded people will contribute a lot more to university life, so don't feel like you have to make it all about the subject. A good balance is more appealing! Good luck!

Tue, 09/12/2008 - 12:00

i love the speach about

Tue, 09/12/2008 - 12:01

i really like this part...'Biology is where my interest of studying Biomedical sciences stems from, as it explains a world not visible to the eye, yet plays a central role in everyday life'

Sun, 04/10/2009 - 18:51

can someone please post another biomedical sciences personal statement for me to gain ideas from... struggling a bit with this one - i'm just not a 'going to biology lectures' kind of person

Thu, 08/07/2010 - 13:27

This personal statement is quite good, it actually inspired me, thanks ! =]

Tue, 14/09/2010 - 09:18

you miss loads of full stops at the end of every paragraph. unis might sctrutinise you for not using simple punctuation. even though im not using apostrophes n shit. hypocracy ftw.

Thu, 23/06/2011 - 20:50

To be honest, I find the comments below the statement more useful than the actual statement. I'm thinking about applying to BioMed and this statement got me freaking out because the only thing i've done is read the same magazines... I mean, wow... there is no way i could do as much in the next couple of months..Thanks people that commented saying that they didn't write the same on theirs.. :) also i was at MMU this week and attended a lecture on how to write a statement, and the lady said the it shouldnt be boring, and i've skipped a few lines on this one just to get to the end sooner!

Thu, 30/06/2011 - 17:39

I hav gone through both , the personal statement and comments as well.I am also appying for biomed and m worried for my personal statement as m nt getting how to frame anythng ,actually everything.And frankly speaking when i read this personal statement , i am really afraid as i don't hav much work experiences and i havn't attended any conferences or lectures.But after going thru the comments i m a bit relaxed but still i need anyone to help me , as m very afraid what to do, so please anyone , who have gone through this phase kindly help me.

Deric Haber

Mon, 05/09/2011 - 10:37

nice statement man. but you seem talk bout urself the hole tyme. thas selfish bro. you might wanna talk about some on else for a change...nice sta3ement though bro....nawt

I would bet that this person

Tue, 04/10/2011 - 15:29

I would bet that this person actually wanted to do medicine but didn't get the grades. GP/st.johns work experience? bit much for biomed. and they are typical medical w/exp placements. I don't think this is a reliable personal statement to use if you are interested souly in biomedicine. It makes you feel inadequate.

Thu, 13/10/2011 - 14:49

How on earth did you manage to fit all of this into your personal statement. Your personal statement is not persuasive enough. Common are you serious?

Tue, 20/03/2012 - 21:08

Awesome article. Awesome.

This was a good personal

Thu, 28/06/2012 - 08:38

This was a good personal statement, its not easy to write one. Thoes out there posting negative comments it would be kind enough not to post them. This person has been kind and shoen us an example. You are not required to copy this personal statement as u may be caught 4 plagarism. Just take ideas. Be innovative. I am not this person but I dont like reading negative comments. What u do have to c is that the structure and the lay out of in in ur own words tell 1 What are you currently studying and 2 why u wana do the course 3 work experience related to the course 4 out of school acheivment related to course 5 hobbies n interese relae them to the course. 6 concluding statement. the same thing goes over and over again being punctual, well commited , good team work, relaiblity, passion etc. Hope this helps.

Wed, 21/11/2012 - 12:34

personally i think .. this

Thu, 21/02/2013 - 13:09

personally i think .. this statement is soo good it makes me feel like shit!.. and good in the sense .. it feels super human.. and if someone did all that just to get into an institute.. hatts off! to that persons commitment. Agreed its boring.. but with stuff like that i feel my passion for the subject would have seemed much more real.. thanks anyway. maybe we will al just drown in our sorrow of being losers.. nah just kidding.. hopefully we will all get in something different .. something of our own.. thanks man

when does he/she sleeps, eat.

Thu, 10/10/2013 - 16:19

when does he/she sleeps, eat. socislise????

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Biomedical sciences degree personal statement example (1e) work experience

My choice to study Biomedical Science has stemmed from a genuine desire to be part of a department which the National Health Service greatly depends on. Having suffered from food allergies since birth, I have come to value the roles played by the different divisions of the health service in ensuring my well being. In future, I hope to specialise in immunology and I am keen to undertake research in the field, to aid in finding treatments for immunological disorders. To gain a deeper insight into what Biomedical Science necessitates, I organised a placement at a local hospital for a few weeks where I had the opportunity to observe doctors on ward rounds and speak to many patients. Doing so just drove my desire to improve healthcare further and made me more certain of the fact that I’d like to contribute in the advancement of healthcare- that is to aid in improving the lives of many. In addition to so, I also had the opportunity to observe several endoscopy and bronchoscopy procedures in which the head nurse took samples (biopsies) from abnormal tissues inside patients’ digestive tracts, which were then tested for, for cancers, by the biomedical scientists. This highlighted to me the importance of the biomedical scientist within the healthcare sector and made me appreciate how significant the role they play within the health sector is. My passion to study Biomedical Science is displayed in my A level subject choices; from which I have gained and improved in various skills, that will be required in studying biomedical sciences. Biology has allowed me to comprehend and value the complexity of numerous body processes which are constantly ongoing inside us and gain a deeper insight into how they work. Studying the kidney was something I found intriguing seeing as I found it incredible how such a small organ has such a great and crucial role within our bodies, and how if it does not function properly, an artificial structure many times larger in size would never be able to complete the same job as effectively. Biology has also allowed me develop my practical and research skills. Asides from biology, studying maths has aided in me bettering my analytical skills which I know will be required in a Biomedical Science career. Having been selected to take part in the intermediate maths challenge at school and achieving a medal, as well as being awarded an annual maths award, reflect on the strength of my analytical and problem solving skills. Moreover, studying sociology has allowed me to expand on my application skills in the way that I have to apply research and studies to theories as well as criticize them; skills which I am sure will be imperative in my future studies. Outside my studies, translating Tedx talks is something that I enjoy doing. This brings a lot of benefits as I can put all the skills I have gained from completing my A level in the Arabic language into good use. Doing so also provides me with a sense of achievement as I have made it possible for those who do not understand English to be able to understand videos in their own language. Moreover, I have also learnt of the importance of good timekeeping as the translations need to be done within a set time limit and I am aware of the fact that timekeeping is a vital skill, which would be required in to succeed in studying Biomedical Science. As an attendee of a Sudanese Arabic school, organising numerous charity events to raise money for orphanages in the Sudan was a role I thrived in; leading my peers and using my organisational and team working skills to ensure we raised as much money as we possibly could to improve the quality of life for others. Baking is something I enjoy and do on a regular basis, mainly for charity fundraisers. Overall, I see myself as being a motivated and success-driven person and possessing the skills which I see as vital in order for me to succeed in studying Biomedical Science and pursuing a career in it.

Universities Applied to:

• Aston University (Biomedical Science) - Offer (ABB) Firm

Grades Achieved:

• Biology - Predicted: A
• Maths - Predicted:B
• Sociology -Predicted: B
• A2 Arabic -A
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